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11-13-2006 02:24 PM #5
<<With looks and attitude
That really make me hot
He puts me in the mood
So I rev him up.... ALOT
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Mmm.. the "a lot" might work well there, goes better with "hot"... But now sentance too long, lost musical rythm... Not matching music in my head, (we need to get rid of 1 cyllable).





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Yep. It’s pretty sad.
Dead!